I felt like in a film, when it appears a devil and an angel in the
character’s shoulders, one side says “give the money back” the other “kept it and
go shopping as fast as you can”. I was wondering who I should ignore? because we
do not have enough money to make ends meet.
Finally, as usual, the bright side won and I made a phone call to the
police. I met them on the police station to hand over the money.
Now my family and me are packing. We take the plane to Maldives islands,
we will stay there for 10 days, in a five-star hotel with everything paid.
You could be wondering how we can afford it.
wow loreto! Ilove it! specially the end, it is like the girl is talking to us, and I´ve felt a little jelous.
ReplyDeleteBeatriz Frades
I like the unespected ending. It's also a really funny. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI really like the ending. Very good!
ReplyDeleteIt's a great story. I like how it is writing and I enjoy the ending.
ReplyDeleteLike Pablo and Maite said I like the ending. It´s ironic and so funny. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think you have a very good imagination and a witty sense of humor. Great job loretti.
ReplyDeletei like it. the story have an unespected ending and it so funny.
ReplyDeletewow!! I love the unexpected ending. It is ironic. Good job! In addition it is fun!
ReplyDeleteReally good story with a really sharp ending.
ReplyDeleteGreat job, my Lore.