When I met her for the first time was 30 years ago. From that moment I knew she had something special inside. She always looks good, like she still being 20 years old, but she is 60 now. During all this time I have been trying to know what could be the reason why she is like that.
One day, finally, I asked her it. It had been a mystery for many years, and I needed to know it. When she explained it to me I was very surprise. I have thought in many other possibilities, but never on that.
One day, finally, I asked her it. It had been a mystery for many years, and I needed to know it. When she explained it to me I was very surprise. I have thought in many other possibilities, but never on that.
Now I
understand everything, why she looks like she was a teenager. She have been
following a really special diet during all this year. It is very particular diet.
She created it. The diet is based on eat make-up, it is the secret of her
rejuvenation.
Great again, my Mary:
ReplyDeleteYet again I would go for shorter sentences such as "I met her 30 years ago". "She looked so young"...
I love your following sentence and I think there's the core of your stoty:"From that moment, I knew she had something special inside...". She seemed so...
Keep going, I love it!
yes, the kick at the end is great. Somehow I feel you could have written it in less words, though. well done in any case
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